We decided instead to use our day to read and type up work for the students. We weren't able to put up much of their work yet as many of them had not yet finished their stories or were only getting started on them.
Both Jass and I were impressed with the work that the students were producing, we started with the Year Sevens work and while they're only young, the stories they wrote were all quite impressive, and mature especially for their age. It was surprising to find out just how advanced mentally, and how mature the Year Sevens were, Jass and I thought we'd have to go in to each year group and teach them in a different way because they would be at different levels and different learning abilities, however, we found that the Year Sevens understood what we were talking about just as well as the Year Nines did. It made us have to rethink what we were going to do with them altogether, because as all the students were more advanced than we originally thought, it meant they got through the work faster than we anticipated, so we had to come up with more work and activities to do with them.
It was a huge new learning moment for us, as neither of us had never done any work like this before, it was a learning curve on what it is like to be a teacher (albeit only a small part of being a teacher).
These are the characters that Year Sevens and Year Nines came up with (Year Eights still needed to be typed up)
Year 7 Characters
Sammirah
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Physical
Description:
Strengths/Flaws:
Intelligent
but she's afraid of spiders, she's selfish and stuck up
Relationships: No
friends
|
Alex Drake
Age: 21
Gender: Both
male and female
Physical
Description:
Strengths/Flaws:
Relationships:
|
Peter Holes
Age: 47
Gender: Male
Physical
Description:
Strengths/Flaws:
He
is very social and friendly, but he is not clever at all
Relationships:
He
didn't have good relationships in school, his parents thought him
to be who he is now
|
Robin
Age: 14
Gender: MalePhysical Description:
He is strong, but he is afraid of lines (lions?) Relationships: He is easy going |
Year Nine Characters
Sharlie Matt
Age: 93
Gender: Male
Physical Description:
Strengths/Flaws:
Very intelligent and
observant, however, he does not know how to walk, no one takes him
seriously because he looks like a baby
Relationships:
He goes to a group for
people with disabilities and he has a girlfriend who is very tall
|
La Jenny
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Physical
Description:
Strengths/Flaws:
She
is intelligent and brave, but she is clumsy and has no self
initiative
Relationships:
She
is very nice to people, very sociable, has a lot of friends.
|
Lionel:
Age: 34
Gender: Male
Physical
Description:
Strengths/Flaws:
He
is very honest, but, he is arrogant and close-minded
Relationships:
He
is friendly
|
These are the stories that were written by the Year Sevens using the characters seen above:
(Some students wrote stories individually, some wrote as part of a group.) (Stories are written word for word what they wrote).
Alex
Drake
Alex Drake is walking through the forest. It is 10:00 pm, and he is
going to his house. Alex suddenly falls and he finds a blank diary.
There's nothing written in it. Two minutes after Alex arrives to his
house and decides to go to bed. The next morning Alex starts writing
in his diary. Alex has always wished for a pet so he wrote it in his
diary. Two hours later somebody knocks on his door, so he decides to
go and look. He opens the door and he sees a box moving, he takes the
box into his house and opens it, and a little puppy jumps out of the
box. Alex exclaims “Wow a dog!!”
Alex found out that what he had written in his diary had come true,
so he decided to write all of his wishes: an iPhone XS Max, a
girlfriend, a bigger house, and that his dead grandparents would be
resurrected.
So, after this, Alex decides to go for a walk to the forest with his
puppy. While on the walk, something hit him in the back of his head,
he looks at it and sees that it's an iPhone XS Max. He is so happy
that he starts to dance. On his way back home, he hears a voice
calling him from behind, he turns to see his grandparents. He goes
home to find that there is an even bigger house there. He goes in and
sees that there is a beautiful lady in his bed, waiting for him.
Suddenly, he wakes up and he realises that all that happened was a
dream.
Peter
Holes
“It's my birthday!” said Peter with a very excited attitude.
When he goes out, he sees that no one is there, he thinks that all
the people must be hiding so they can have his birthday surprise. If
you don't know, he is very social and is friendly with all the people
of the city, the happy city.
Sometime after, he sees that no one is there, so, as he is very
dumb, he goes to see a film in the Planetocio. (The film is
'Avengers: Endgame') and so, he starts his birthday without humans in
the world.
Robin
Perjual
Robin was going from school to home. To get home, he needed to pass
through a side street. A creepy man was following Robin, so he hid
behind a green bin. Then the creepy man went running until he got him.
He put Robin in a black bag. The creepy man took Robin out of the
bag. At night, Robin started planning how to get out of the house. At
3:00am, Robin started to escape, but the only way of getting out of
house was passing through a corridor with a lot, a lot, a lot of
squares and lines. I didn't mention, that Robin is scared of lines.
He started walking without stepping on the lines, but suddenly, he
heard the man getting out of bed. He started running, and stepped on
a line and he went crazy. When the man was going to take him, he hit
him because he was crazy and so he hit the man and the man fainted.
So, he started running to the street. One friend of his mother found
him and took him to the hospital and Robin got better, but the room
in the hospital was full of lines so he closed his eyes and when he
opened his eyes he was in his room, so he calmed down.
Sammirah
Sammirah was walking through the street. It was very windy out.
Suddenly, a book fell, carried by the wind, on her head. Sammirah
opened the book; it was blank. Then, Sammirah had an idea. She went
home and wrote a book about how she broke the record of likes in a
YouTube video. Before she went to bed, she went to check how many
likes she did have. It was amazing, she had 8.38 million likes. She
searched on Google what the record of likes was. She was paralysed,
her video had the record of likes in the whole world. Then, Sammirah
remembered the blank book, “So...that book is...” she said.
. . .
She finds the book in a dirty bin in the garden, she opens it and
sees that it is blank inside. “I don't like it, it is brown and
dirty, well I see.” then she remembered when she saw 3 50E on the
ground, but somebody else got to it first, so she got the book and
started to write “I wanted those 50E”, when suddenly, in her
pocket, there was 50E, but, some minutes later, the room starts
filling up with snakes.
. . .
Hi, my name is Sammirah, I am 16, and I have blonde hair and blue
eyes.
I have a problem, I don't have friends. My relationship is not
everything good but they are so nice and that is believable. The
other day, I found a book, the pages were white, no one had written
in it yet. So, I found out that it was a bit magic. The other day, I
found one hundred euros, but a man got there first, I wrote it in the
diary, and I found a hundred euro in my pocket.
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